The Worst of the Worst

Two of Red Sage's editors have a blog I quite enjoy and recently they invited people to submit the most egregious examples of mixed up POV they could possibly write. (IE, people had to WRITE them, not send examples of other people's writing). I may or may not have participated (like I could resist!), and if you want to voice your opinion on which entry is the worst of the worst, you can find the blog here: http://edittorrent.blogspot.com/

Feel free to theorize here, not there, as to which entry might be my crap.

JW